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Long way 4 months ago I decided finally lose weight :) before many years its time! Is very complicated because i don't have time between my job and own business but ok I decide no more excuses :D I have support all my family and friends, I'm very happy. For the little changes that i see everyday but no is the end! Also I'm excited for my english I've advanced :) I hope my 2016 were best! Grettings :) (Sorry for my writting) :P
Nov 24, 2015 11:52 PM
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Long way

4 months ago I finally decided lose weight. :) It's been many years so its time! Is very complicated because I don't have time between my job and own business but ok, I decided no more excuses. :D I have the support of my family and friends, I'm very happy for the little changes that i see everyday but it is not the end! Also I'm excited for my English, I've advanced. :) I hope my 2016 is the best! Grettings :) (Sorry for my writting) :P

 

[[Great job!]]

November 26, 2015

A long way to go

Four months ago I decided to finally lose some weight, and not before time! Its very complicated because I don't have much free time as I have my own business but ok I decided no more excuses :D I have the support of all my family and friends, I'm very happy. For the little changes that I see everyday but I have not yet reached my goal/ideal weightis the end! Also I'm also excited that my English is advancing :) I hope to keep improving in 2016. were best! Grettings :) (Sorry for my writting) :P

 

Very good you just need a few connecting words added to your sentences. 

Don't loose too much weight, I think women who have a fuller figure are more attractive than thin women.

November 25, 2015
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