Question Please, help me to choose a correct way of expressing some things (CAPITAL LETTERS): 1) I have a strong motivation IN applying for this scholarship .... 2) During my STUDY/STUDUING in this

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Question Please, help me to choose a correct way of expressing some things (CAPITAL LETTERS): 1) I have a strong motivation IN applying for this scholarship .... 2) During my STUDY/STUDUING in this university I ....

Nov 25, 2015 1:37 AM

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Please, help me to choose a correct way of expressing some things (CAPITAL LETTERS):
1) I have a strong motivation IN applying for this scholarship ....
2) During my STUDY/STUDUING in this university I ....

1*) I have a strong motivation TO apply for this scholarship...

1**) I feel heavily inclined (I feel this is better than motivation in this context) to apply for this scholarship because...

2*) During my studies at university I learned...

I don't know if you still need help with this, but I just wanted to give you different ways to word things.

December 6, 2015

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Please, help me to choose a correct way of expressing some things (CAPITAL LETTERS):
1) I have a great desire to apply strong motivation IN applying for this scholarship ....
2) During my studies STUDY/STUDUING in this university/at university x, I ....

November 25, 2015