Paulo Ribeiro
Professional Teacher
The Evil Scientist I followed the evil scientist into a dark room. What I saw, I would never forget… I kept behind the counter, trying to keep unseen from that point. At the same time I couldn’t see the entire room. It wasn’t a big place. There were several book shelves around a sort of “medical recliner chair”. A man, in doctor’s clothing, was standing next to the chair holding a syringe. On the chair was another man all in white clothes. I was appalled to see,the man was tied to the chair. Shocked, I froze. “What the hell is he doing?”, I asked myself. Before I decided to do something to interfere it was late. The doctor had already pulling the syringe off. For an entire minute the man in chair stood motionless...
Nov 25, 2015 1:43 AM
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The Evil Scientist

I followed the evil scientist into a dark room. What I saw, I would never forget…
I kept behind the counter, trying to keep (or, remain) unseen from that point (or, position). At the same time, I couldn’t see the entire room. It wasn’t a big place. There were several book shelves around a sort of “medical recliner chair”. A man in doctor’s clothing was standing next to the chair holding a syringe. On the chair was (or, sat) another man dressed all (or, entirely) in white clothes. I was appalled to see that the man was tied to the chair. Shocked (or, In a state of shock), I froze. “What the hell is he doing?”, I asked myself. By the time I decided to do something to interfere, it was too late. The doctor had already pulled the syringe off. For an entire minute, the man in chair sat motionless...

 

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Very creative and well written! 

November 25, 2015
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