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e-Mail E-Mail Hello Flor, Thanks for your e-mail, I hope you're fine, it was nice to hear from you. I'm very happy because we will be living together soon, all it's well here. Guess what!, I'm learning a lot of English, I'm studying three or four hours all days, you know. I'm very much happy. Anyway, I'm going to study all days for one year. I'm looking forward to seeing you, when you will come here, I hope, we will do many plans together. Well, that's all for now. Give my love to everyone, and write back soon. Yours, Jesús.
Nov 25, 2015 12:49 PM
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Hello Flor,
Thanks for your e-mail, I hope you're ok, it was nice to hear from you.
I'm very happy that we will be living together soon, all it's is well here.
Guess what? I'm learning a lot of English, I'm studying three or four hours every day, you know. I'm very much happy. Anyway, I'm going to study every day for one year.
I'm looking forward to seeing you, when you will come here I hope, we will do many things together.
Well, that's all for now. Give my love to everyone, and write back soon.

Yours, Jesús.

 

Red = corrections Blue = suggestions

For me it seems more natural to say ''I hope you are OK/well'' instead of ''I hope you are fine''  However to answer that question, I would reply.   

''Yes I'm fine thanks''

 

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December 1, 2015

e-Mail

E-Mail

Hello Flor,
Thanks for your e-mail, I hope you're fine, it was nice to hear from you.
I'm very happy because we will be living together soon, all it's is well here.
Guess what!, I'm learning a lot of English,! I'm studying three or four hours all days everyday, you know. I'm very much happy. Anyway, I'm going to study all days everyday for one year.
I'm looking forward to seeing you,. when When you will come here, I hope, we will do many plans things together.
Well, that's all for now. Give my love to everyone, and write back soon.

Yours, Jesús.

November 26, 2015
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