Ricardo
[artitle] Smartphone - a great invention Smartphone - a great invention Almost everybody has a smartphone. But is it a great invention? I think there are both advantages and disadvantages. The first advantage is that people can communication each other easier. Secondly, with smartphone connected on internet it’s possible find anything, e.g.: a restaurant, a shop, or a place. Thirdly, if you have an accident in a desert place than you can call help via cell phone. Also, if you have children and they have smartphone than you know where they are via GPS. On the other hand, there are also disadvantages. Smartphone can be able to many things, so the people spent more time use that then have more bacteria and people has more contact with that. Secondly, same time can decrease distance can distance, people can connected with everybody online and sometime forget to give attention for people closed theirs. For instant a student that is in a classroom receive a message, the student stop what to do and read and or reply the message. To sum up, I think the invention of the smartphone has more advantages. We just take use it at moment and place right. Smartphone save live however can destroy relationship. Use careful. Write by Ricardo. On 25 November, 2015.
Nov 25, 2015 10:15 PM
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[artitle] Smartphone - a great invention

Smartphone - a great invention

Almost everybody has a smartphone. But is it a great invention? I think there are both advantages and disadvantages.

The first advantage is that people can communication communicate with each other easier more easily. Secondly, with a smartphone connected on to the internet it’s possible to find anything, e.g.: a restaurant, a shop, or a place. Thirdly, if you have an accident in a desert an isolated place than then you can call for help via your cell phone. Also, if you have children and they have smartphones than then you can know where they are via GPS.

On the other hand, there are also disadvantages. Smartphones can be are able to do many things, so the people spent spend more time use that using them, and then they have more bacteria and people has have more contact with that. Secondly, same time can decrease distance can distance*, people can be connected with everybody online and sometime forget to give attention to people closed close to theirs themselves. For In the instant a student that is in a classroom receives a message, the student stops what to do their doing and reads and or replies to the message.

To sum up, I think the invention of the smartphone has more advantages than disadvantages. We just take use it at moment and place right.** Smartphones save lives, but however they can destroy relationships. Use them carefully.

Write by Ricardo.
On 25 November, 2015.

 

* "Sometimes when you decrease the distance between people, you can make them more distant"

** "We just need to use them in the right time and place" 



November 25, 2015
Interesting entry. Smartphones have made our lives both easier and harder. No doubt that how we deal with this technology will have many consequences for the future. I agree with you that there are more advantages, but it's unfortunate that some of the disadvantages can be quite annoying!!
November 25, 2015
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