I Live in the chilean Patagonia where the wheather it`s changeable All my life I have lived either the desert or in center of the country where there is a mild climate. I remember the first time that

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I Live in the chilean Patagonia where the wheather it`s changeable All my life I have lived either the desert or in center of the country where there is a mild climate. I remember the first time that I came here, it was windy but sunny, I tried to walk by sidewalk of the beach but the wind didn`t let me, so I Had to take a cab. I was astonished by the colors, almost everything seems too shine. Later I was told that here exists a big hole on the ozone layer.I think that is why I saw so many bright colors and so many rainbows. On the end of May, I started to move here. I rented a house, the salesman said that she will let the door opened ready for me to enter then I took a fly to Punta Arenas, all was set. When I arrive the sky were clear blue but it was bitterly cold and the door of my new house was locked then I decided to brake into my new house, fortunately the door spontaneously opened. I was so happy!. By midday, I planned to go to the mall, to buy a few thing, but I couldn`t because my car was been transported by truck therefore I had to walk. When I was walking I was rained off and had to went back. I was drenched. At night it was below freezing and started to snow; a blanket of snow covered all the city. It was gorgeous. I had never seen snowing until that day. Today, few years later, we have a sunny spell, the temperature it`s about 18 celsius degrees and I think I`ll get a heatstroke.

Nov 25, 2015 10:58 PM

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I live in the Chilean Patagonia where the wheather it`s is changeable

All my life I have lived either in the desert or in center of the country where there is a mild climate.
I remember the first time that I came here, it was windy but sunny. I tried to walk by the sidewalk of the beach but the wind didn't let me, so I had to take a cab. I was astonished by the colors, almost everything seems too shine. Later I was told that here exists a big hole in the ozone layer.I think that is why I saw so many bright colors and so many rainbows.
On At the end of May, I started to move here. I rented a house. The salesman (salesperson or saleswoman) said that she will let leave the door opened, ready for me to enter. Then I took a fly flight to Punta Arenas and all was set. When I arrived the sky were was clear blue but it was bitterly cold and the door of my new house was locked. Then I decided to brake break into my new house. Fortunately the door spontaneously opened. I was so happy!
By midday, I planned to go to the mall to buy a few things, but I couldn't because my car was been being transported by truck. Therefore I had to walk. When I was walking I was rained off on and had to went go back. I was drenched.
At night it was below freezing and started to snow; a blanket of snow covered all the city. It was gorgeous. I had never seen snowing until that day. <-- you wrote this part very well!
Today, few years later, we have a sunny spell. The temperature it`s is about 18 celsius degrees degrees Celsius and I think I'll get a heatstroke.