Suzuka
11/26/2015 Hello Today it was such a good day. I'm going to talking about my friends. I have Venezuelan and Peruvian friends in language shool. Firstly, I'm going to talking about Venezuelan friend. We met about 1 month half ago. I was able to go up next level class after the exam. We talked about something(I forgot) for class. After then we became often talking. She's English is quite slowly and she is very calm as well. So I never looked she's move quickly(I'd like to see other Venezuelan). We have played every weekend this last 1 month. We have same hobby that is movie and walking. We usually walking around the city after class. Today also we talked a lot after class that about what do we do this weekend. Maybe we will go to the beach with her and the other friends. Anyway I love her but she will stay until next April. It still has time however I feel very very lonely that she goes back her country someday. I hope to see you long time. Thank you always. Secondly, I'm going to talking about Peruvian friend. I changed the class again a few weeks ago after the exam(I was not able to go up next level haha). After then we met at the new class. She came the school with her husband. She can speak Spanish and Portuguese as well. She is very clever, kind and active that she usually ask teacher about her not sure. I cannot explaining well however anyway I thought I want to become like her. Really they are amazing. I am so happy to meet them. Tomorrow, finally I will graduate from the school. I had been to the school since this September. Time is so fast. They have passed during I don't realize(I think this sentence is wrong). Sometimes it was boring but I think I'm great to go to school because I had amazing time with amazing friends. After graduate, I'm gonna just work earnestly and I have decided to moving near the school for my work. I can meet friends anytime(I hope haha). I almost crying for some reason. I have to finish this around. Thank you for reading until here. Please help me improve them. Thank you.
Nov 26, 2015 1:49 PM
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11/26/2015

Hello
Today it was such a good day.
I'm going to talking about my friends.
I have Venezuelan and Peruvian friends in language shool.
Firstly, I'm going to talking about my Venezuelan friend. We met about 1 month and a half ago. I was able to go up to a higher next level class after the exam. We talked about something(I forgot) for class. After then that, we became friends by often talking. She's Her English is quite slowly and she is very calm as well. So I never looked she's move quickly(This sentence seems somewhat confusing)(I'd like to see other Venezuelan). We have played every weekend this last 1 month. We have the same hobbies of that is watching movies and walking. We usually walking around the city after class. Today also we also talked a lot after class that about what do we are going to do this weekend. Maybe we will go to the beach with her and the other friends. Anyway, I love her but she will stay until next April. It still has have time, however, I will feel very very lonely that she has to goes back her country someday. I hope to see you very soon. long time. Thank you always.
Secondly, I'm going to talking about Peruvian friend. I changed the class again a few weeks ago after the exam(I was not able to go up next level haha). After that,then we met at the new class. She came the school with her husband. She can speak Spanish and Portuguese as well. She is very clever, kind, and active. that she usually ask the teacher about her not sure. (somewhat confusing). I cannot explaining well. However, anyway I thought I wanted to become like her. Really, they are amazing. I am so happy to meet them.

Tomorrow, finally I will finally graduate from the school. I had been to the school since this September. Time is so fast. It They have passed so fast that during I don't  didn't even realize it.(I think this sentence is wrong). Sometimes it was boring, but I think I'm great it was worth it to go to school because I had amazing time with amazing friends. After graduate, I'm gonna just work earnestly. and I have decided to moving move near the school for my work. I can meet friends anytime(I hope haha). I'm almost crying for some reason. I have to finish this. around. Thank you for reading until here.
Please help me improve them. Thank you.

 

<em>I'm so glad you were able to make friends and have a great time at school. I hope you're able to continue making friends and have more amazing memories in the future! I hope you also glance at some of the corrections I've made to your writing.
Best of luck!</em>

November 26, 2015
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