Javier
Do you think prison is an effective way of punishment? From my point of view, prison is a good way of punishment in a lot of occasions. Sometimes, even it's the only way, because criminals could hurt other people if they weren't locked up. Somehow, criminals with crimes of blood or violent crimes shouldn't stay out of the jail, however, small thieves or perhaps pickpockets could have punishments lighter. For instance, I think that it would be better who they were punished with social jobs or something like this. Thank you in advance for your review. It's very useful to me.
Nov 26, 2015 8:22 PM
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Do you think prison is an effective way form of punishment?

From my point of view, prison is a good way form of punishment in a lot of occasions situations. Sometimes, even it's maybe even the only way, because criminals could hurt other people if they weren't locked up.

Somehow, criminals with crimes of blood or violent crimes shouldn't stay out of the jail, however, small thieves or perhaps pickpockets could have lighter punishments lighter. For instance, I think that it would be better who if they were punished with social jobs or something like this that.

Thank you in advance for your review. It's very useful to me.

 

Well written Javi, just one small mistake in red and some suggestions to sound more natural in blue/grey

 

"Crimes of blood" - This phrase is not used in English. The Spanish phrase <em>"crimen de sangre"</em> translates as "violent crime", which is the other phrase that you used in the same sentence.

November 30, 2015
It is perfect! Great! If someone needs a punichment do it!
November 26, 2015
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