A Canadian Teenager Died from a Coyote's Bite in the Forest. (headline, capitalize main nouns and verbs)
A Canadian teenager died from coyote's bite in the (what forest?)forest (when?). The police announced that the coyotes' pack tried to take her for food from their investigation of the site. (This is a news report, do not use you) Residents nearby were concerned about the incident. Even though now no animals are superior to human beings in food chain in the nature, we were once incredibly weak and trivial beings that could be eaten by stronger predators at any time in the primitive era. (You do not use opinion in a news report. Stick to the facts of the incident) However, people seem to completely forget that humans were once part of the natural animal world before the time of civilizatin. Even an coyote expert (give him a name) was really shocked that the coyotes would attack a human as if they were prey. I wonder why humans are so self-centered and consider themselves exceptional beings in the natural world. (Last part is opinion. If you are doing a news report, you would give more details of Who, What, Where, How and Why. If this is an opinion about wild animals and human interaction, you need to start with an opinion about how humans may be intruding on wild animal habitats etc.)
A Canadian teenager died from coyotes' bites in the forest.
A Canadian teenager died from coyotes' ( you don't need to specify more than one coyote here, it sounds strange) bites in the forest. The police announced that the coyotes' group of coyotes tried to catch her for food, judging from some cruel proofs. As you might expect, people wondered how such a cruel accident could happen near the a modern civilized city. Even though now no animals are superior to human beings in the food chain in the nature, we were once incredibly weak and trivial beings that could be eaten by stronger predators at any time in the primitive era. However, people seem to completely forget that they were once nothing but one of animals in the natural world in the past. Even an expert who studies coyotes said he was really shocked at the fact that the wild animals regarded a human as a prey and attacked. Actually, I wonder why humans are always self-centered like this instead, and why they think of themselves as an exceptional being in the natural world.
It's sad, but I don't really find it that surprising. Deforestation and destruction of habitat eliminates the natural food sources that predators rely on and at the same time forces them closer to civilization. And in the end, they're wild animals, no one can predict with a 100% certainty what an animal will do based on past evidence.
We have a similar issue here in Australia all the time with sharks. Some people want to kill the sharks to protect the swimmers/surfers or set up nets (which kill lots of other sealife, not just sharks). Personally, I think if you want to go into the water you do so at your own risk. After all the sharks are just doing what sharks do, people dont <em>need </em>to go swimming in the ocean. They do so for pleasure, not survival.
