Marco
First spell His arms yet been trembling and dark blue enlightened. In the water round him he could seen a smollest white light that one at a time are desappearing. He's confused and suddendly tired. But the stone is in his hand. He didn't know how it happened. He's swimming in the lake, as everiday, when his stone, the stone of his family going out of the pocket and got to move to the lake's ground. In a few second the most important thing he had was disappear in the dark water. He is afraid, his throat go drying, he can clearly hear step up his heartbeat. When suddendly the thing happened. An energy that he doesn't understand catch him. And the rest is all confused, strange and new for him. It was his first spell.
Nov 27, 2015 12:17 AM
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First spell

His arms had been trembling and dark blue. In the water around him he could see small white lights that one at a time were desappearing.
He was confused and suddendly tired. But there was a stone in his hand. He didn't know how it got there.
He was swimming in the lake, as usual, when his stone, the stone of his family fell out of his pocket and descended to the lake bottom. In a few seconds the most precious thing he had disappeared into the dark water.
He was afraid, his throat went dry, he could clearly feel his heartbeat increase. When suddenly something happened. An energy that he couldn't understand entered him. And the rest was all confusing, strange and new for him.
It was his first spell.

November 27, 2015
nobody edit this my text? it's too wrong to understand?
November 27, 2015
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