What is happening? Today I went to English meeting conversation. There were some people I know, but I haven't been there for a long time so, all of them seemed strange for me. I met a weird guy who

Marcio Cleber

What is happening? Today I went to English meeting conversation. There were some people I know, but I haven't been there for a long time so, all of them seemed strange for me. I met a weird guy who lived a year in Ireland. He spoke so slow that I thought he realised that I was a beginner. There was a girl who I always saw her in some pictures on facebook's group. I thought she was starting learning speak English, but I heard her speaking and she spoke very well. She is so pretty beautiful girl and all of boys there was trying to speak to her. It was the first time that I listened more them speak. I think it is a good experience, I must know how people speak. I mist know if they speak fast, slow or use a advanced English. I hope enjoing these meetings and improve my speaking skill.

Nov 27, 2015 2:23 AM

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Original text in italics, my corrections in normal format, and notes pre-ceeded with a ‘--‘

Today I went to English meeting conversation.
Today I went to an English conversation meeting.

There were some people I know, but I haven't been there for a long time so, all of them seemed strange for me.
I knew some of the people there, but I haven’t been there for a while so they all seemed unfamiliar to me.

I met a weird guy who lived a year in Ireland.
I met a guy who lived in Ireland for a year.
-- Why was he weird? It’s better to say exactly why you thought he was weird.

There was a girl who I always saw her in some pictures on facebook's group.
There was a girl who I always see in pictures on the group’s Facebook profile.

I thought she was starting learning speak English, but I heard her speaking and she spoke very well.
I thought she was just starting to learn to speak English, but I heard her speaking and she spoke very well.

She is so pretty beautiful girl and all of boys there was trying to speak to her.
She is so beautiful all of the boys were trying to talk to her.

It was the first time that I listened more them speak.
It was the first time that I listened more than I spoke.

I mist know if they speak fast, slow or use a advanced English.
I must know if they speak fast or slow, or if their English is at an advanced level.

I hope enjoing these meetings and improve my speaking skill.
I enjoy these meetings and hope to improve my skill in speaking.

-- Good luck with the pretty girl! ;)

November 27, 2015

What is happening?

Today I went to an English conversational meeting. There were some people I knew, but I haven't been there for a long time. They all seemed strange to me.
I met a weird guy who lived a year in Ireland. He spoke so slow that I thought he realised that I was a beginner.
There was a girl who I always saw in some pictures on a Facebook group. I thought she was starting to learn English. When I heard her speak, she spoke very well. She is a beautiful girl and all of boys were trying to talk to her.
It was the first time that I heard them speak. I think it was a good experience. I must know how people speak. I must know if they speak fast, slow or if they use advanced English.
I am enjoyng these meetings and improving my speaking skills.