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Random Phrases Wǎnshàng hǎo ! Wǒ xiǎng xiě hànyǔ . Wǒ xǐhuan qù dàxué, bù xǐhuan qù gōngzuò . Wǒ zhù zài Hánbǎoshì zài dé guó . Wǒ xǐhuan kàn diànyǐng zài diànshì . Wǒ huì shuōhuà déwén, yīngwén hé pútáoyáyǔ . Wǒ de jiā yǒu sìge rén . Wǒ bàba wǒ māma wǒ jiějie hé wǒ . Dàn wǒ de jiā yě yǒu yīge māo . Tā hén piào liang.
Nov 27, 2015 3:54 AM
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Wǎnshàng hǎo !

Wǒ xiǎng xiě hànyǔ .
Wǒ xǐhuan qù dàxué, bù xǐhuan qù gōngzuò .

Wǒ zhù zài Hánbǎoshì,  tā (means this place)zài dé guó .

Wǒ xǐhuan  zài diànshì shang kàn diànyǐng.(change the position ) 

Wǒ huì shuōhuà (delete:we say "speak" in chinese is shuo )déwén, yīngwén hé pútáoyáyǔ .

Wǒ de jiā yǒu sìge rén . Wǒ  bàba wǒ māma, wǒ jiějie hé wǒ . Dàn wǒ de jiā yě yǒu yīge māo . Tā hén(hěn ,the tones here doesn't change)piào liang.

 

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You did a great job to introduce youself,just need pay more attention to use Chinese comma to stop.

November 29, 2015
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Random Phrases

Wǎnshàng hǎo !

晚上好!Guten Abend!^_^

 

Wǒ xiǎng xiě hànyǔ .

我想写汉语。


Wǒ xǐhuan qù dàxué, bù xǐhuan qù gōngzuò .
我喜欢去大学,不喜欢去工作。


Wǒ zhù zài Hánbǎoshì zài dé guó .
我住在汉堡市在德国。 you'd better say 我住在德国的汉堡市。


Wǒ xǐhuan kàn diànyǐng zài diànshì .

我喜欢看电视在电视上。But you'd better say 我喜欢在电视上看电视。

Wǒ huì shuōhuà déwén, yīngwén hé pútáoyáyǔ .

我会说德文,英文和葡萄牙语。Ich lerne Deutsh.Haha

Wǒ de jiā yǒu sìge rén . Wǒ bàba wǒ māma wǒ jiějie hé wǒ . Dàn wǒ de jiā yě yǒu yīge māo . Tā hén piào liang.

我的家有四个人,我爸爸我妈妈我姐姐和我。但我的家也有一个猫。它很漂亮。you'd better say 一只猫yi4 zhi1 mao1

November 27, 2015
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Wǎnshàng hǎo !

Wǒ xiǎng xiě xue2 hànyǔ .
Wǒ xǐhuan qù dàxué, bù xǐhuan qù gōngzuò .

Wǒ zhù zài de2guo2 de Hánbǎoshì zài dé guó .

Wǒ xǐhuan kàn diànyǐng zài diànshì .

Wǒ huì shuōhuà déwén, yīngwén hé pútáoyáyǔ .

Wǒ de jiā yǒu sìge rén . Wǒ bàba wǒ māma wǒ jiějie hé wǒ . Dàn wǒ de jiā yě yǒu yīge māo . Tā hén piào liang.

November 27, 2015
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Random Phrases

Wǎnshàng hǎo !

Wǒ xiǎng xiě hànyǔ .
Wǒ xǐhuan qù dàxué, bù xǐhuan qù gōngzuò .

Wǒ zhù zài Hán4bǎoshì zài dé guó .

Wǒ xǐhuan zài diànshì kàn diànyǐng  .

Wǒ huì shuō déwén, yīngwén hé pútáoyáyǔ .

Wǒ de jiā yǒu sìge rén . Wǒ bàba wǒ māma wǒ jiějie hé wǒ . Dàn wǒ de jiā yě yǒu yīge māo . Tā hén piào liang.
November 27, 2015
Thanks all for the corrections and tips! :)
November 29, 2015
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