Yasuyuki
Is my English strange? At first we are gona there and eat for lunch. After that , gona ABC area. はじめに私達はそこに行き昼食をたべます。それからABC地区に行きます。   My sixth sence told me that this road is wrong. Maybe I can just feel it ! この道は間違っていると直感がはたらいた。 多分、そんな予感がする。
Nov 27, 2015 12:54 PM
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Is my English strange?

At first we are gona there and eat for lunch. We first went there for lunch.  After that we went to the ABC area.
After that , gona ABC area.
はじめに私達はそこに行き昼食をたべます。それからABC地区に行きます。  

My sixth sence told me that this road is wrong. My sixth sense  told me that it was the wrong road.  Maybe I could just feel it!
Maybe I can just feel it !
この道は間違っていると直感がはたらいた。
多分、そんな予感がする。

November 27, 2015
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