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Horror films Yesterday I went to Rome by train for meeting some my friends. I went shopping with them all over the morning until lunch time. We had lunch in a beautiful restaurant and we ate a lot. Then I wanted to go to a museum but two my friends didn't want. Consequently we made a turn in Rome's streets and then we went to my friends' house. There we watched a horror film in Tv: it was terrificant and I, who am simply scaring, didn't sleep nothing... Today I came back to home and now I am watching a commedy!!! I won't see horror film for a lot of time!!!!
Nov 27, 2015 8:36 PM
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Horror films

Yesterday I went to Rome by train to meet some friends. We went shopping together in the morning until lunch time. We had lunch in a beautiful restaurant and we ate a lot. After I wanted to go to a museum but two my friends didn't, consequently we made toured Rome's streets. After the tour we went to my friends' house. There we watched a horror film on TV. Iit was terrifying and I, who am easily scared, couldn't sleep at all... Today I came back home and now I am watching a comedy!!! I don't want to see a horror film ever again!!!!
November 27, 2015

Horror films

Yesterday I went to Rome by train to meet/for a meeting with* some of my friends. I went shopping with them all over for the whole morning until lunch time. We had lunch in/at a beautiful restaurant, and we ate a lot. Then I wanted to go to a museum, but two of my friends didn't want to do this, so /[Consequently] we made took a walk turned in/around Rome('s streets), and then we went to my friends' house. There we watched a horror film in on Tv: it was terrifyingicant and as I, who am easily/simply scareding, I didn't sleep at all nothing... Today I came back to home, and now I am watching a commedy!!! I won't see a horror film for a lot of long time!!!!

*more appropriate if it is an official or business meeting

November 27, 2015
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