Khosro
Let Your Mind Fly Let your mind fly and don’t afraid if it go higher than the roof of believes. Your mind should fly and arrives to summits of doubt and realizes that between horizons of trusts belief and atheism are nearby each other. If your mind fly, instead of this cannon and gun and war the breasts will be veld of kindness, and the palm will be the field of beautiful flowers. If the mind fly, Nobody is ethnic and heathen and impious and pagan and infidels, all of us are innocent and free. (Translation from a poem)
Nov 27, 2015 9:39 PM
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Let Your Mind Fly

Let your mind fly

and don’t be afraid if it goes higher than the roof of belief.

Your mind should fly
and arrive at the summit of doubt
and realize that between horizons of trust (I'm not sure what you mean by "horizons of trust") 
belief and atheism are near each other.

If your mind flies,
instead of this cannons and guns and war
the heart will be a field of kindness,
and the palm (I don't think 'palm' is the right word here... what are you trying to say?) will be a field of beautiful flowers.

If the mind flies,
Nobody would be ethnic or heathen or impious or pagan or infidel,
all of us would be innocent and free.

(Translation from a poem)

 

I corrected the grammar, but there are still parts I don't understand - that's to be expected in a poem though.

November 27, 2015
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