Please correct these sentences

1. Who are you going to BET on? - I want to bet on that black horse called Dark star.
2. Do you remember my ORIGINAL remark? - Yeah, at the beginning of our conversation you promised to provide your MENTORSHIP for Ann. You will be a perfect role model for her.
3. We have COMMONALITY in our love for dogs. WE both began to visit The amateurs dog club PURPOSEFULLY in order to make ACQUAINTANCE with each other.
4. Ann and Tom have a CONSPIRACY to repair the car and then escape from this region to any REMOTE village.
5. Tom has heard the DESIRED responce. Now he is searching for the best ring for his fiancée.
6. A caterpillar is hiding under a leaf during the DOWNPOUR.
7. Ann suffered from psychological trauma. She was subjected to CRUELTY in her INFANCY, but she is safe at the current time.
8. Tom is WEARY of Ann's STRICT rules, which he has to obey.
9. You are insightful, so you have the ability to predict almost everything. - Yes, I am destined to know my future.
10. Do you determine several DISTINCT groups of people? - Yes, I divide people into so-called SCRAPPERS, NERDIES and normal people. Of course, I belong to the latter group. - No, you have forgot to mention one more group. It is the group of NARCISSISTS.

Hello Yljaha,

As far as I can see you have used all of these words correctly, just some errors with the surrounding words. Nearly all the entries you write are these words in sentences. Perhaps you ought to try to write some texts, about hobbies, your city, your child... This will help you in more coherent writing.

All the best

Bob

Please correct these sentences

1. Who Which horse are you going to BET on? - I want to bet on that black horse called Dark Star.

Who > people

2. Do you remember my ORIGINAL remark? - Yeah, at the beginning of our conversation you promised to provide your MENTORSHIP for Ann. You will be perfect role model for her.

Do you remember my earlier remark ? Yeah/Yes. At the begining of our conversation / Earlier you mentioned that you wanted to be a mentor to Ann .You will be the perfect role model for her.

A remark cant be original or not . Its what you had said! You need to find a word to place 'the time' it was made. My initial remark , my previous remak ....

Mentorship> to provide mentorship to Ann ..ok , but , my way is  common.

3. We have a COMMONALITY in our love to for dogs. We /Both of us began to visit the Amateur Dog Club The club of dog's amateurs PURPOSEFULLY in order to make ACQUAINTANCE with each other.

We shared a common love for dogs , so we began to visit the Amateur Dog Club often purposefully to be acquinted with each other.

4. Ann and Tom have a CONSPIRACY to repair the car and then escape from this region in to any REMOTE village.

They conspired to escape from this region to a remote village by repairing the car, and then to flee in it

Conspire is to make a plan secretly . The plan is to escape , not repairing the car)

5. Tom has heard a DESIRED respond. Now he is searching for the best ring for his fiancée.

Tom has received a positve/an encouraging respond . Tom has received the respond that he desired .

6. A caterpillar is hiding under a leaf during a DOWNPOUR.

7. Ann had suffered from a psychological trauma. She was subjected to CRUELTY in her INFANCY, but she is safe currently .in safety current time.

8. Tom is WEARY from Ann's STRICT rules, which he has to obey. ..not good

Tom is feeling weary because he has to follow Ann's strict rules that he must obey ( points to tired /exhausted more than boredom)

Tom  is wearied by Ann's strict rules , but he has to obey

Tom is getting weary of Ann's strict rules ,which he has to obey/but , he has to obey ( getting bored).

Weary: having one's patience, tolerance, or pleasure exhausted —used with of <soon grew weary of waiting

Ann's strict rules , which Tom has to obey , is making Tom weary  ( getting bored or tired ? , so why not use bored or tired))

9. You are so insightful that you have ability to predict almost everything. - Yes, I am destined to know my future.

10. Do you determine several DISTINCT groups of people? - Yes, I divide people on so-called SCRAPPERS, NERDIES and normal people. Of course, I belong to the latter group. - No, you have forgot to mention one more group. It is the group of called 'THE NARCISSISTS.'

How to you determine the several distinct groups/types of people .Yes, I divide people into so-calledSCRAPPERS, NERDIES and normal people . 

How would you catergorised people if I were to ask you to put them into several distintive groups?

Oh, I would catergorised them as scrapper , nerdies or normal people.

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