Amélie
Lost on the Internet With the rapid development of modern high-technology, the computer has become one of the most popular terminals. And thanks to the Internet, the world has no more been regarded as an untouchable giant, but a global village where everyone tends to be the neighborhood. There is no doubt that nowadays people crave for information, especially the younger. The Internet becomes the gateway to a world of information and access to everything one can imagine. You can get the latest news around the world, you can play whenever you like the mind-blowing online games, you can download whatever you need as we have all sorts of resources for you, and you can even find your Mr. Right from Internet dating. Of course, as for we language learners, we can benefit thoroughly from the online language changing sites and communicate with people from totally different culture background. Although it is exactly that the Internet is a double-edged sword, which means you have a danger of slipping into the darker side of the Internet. One day the procrastination turns to a main impediment to your academic success and the addiction of the online gambling stick you onto the chair, finally you are “not in control” and ruin yourself. But for my side, I still insist that we can use the Internet appropriately, we can be the master instead of ruled by it. You should set up a consciousness that you have the ability to arrange the timetable properly and know when to stop. You are an adult, that’s what I want to emphasize, cut it down seasonable before your online hobbies turn to an obsessions!
Nov 28, 2015 2:58 PM
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Lost on the Internet

With the rapid development of modern high-technology, the computer has become one of the most popular terminals. And thanks to the Internet, the world is no more been regarded as an untouchable giant, but a global village where everyone tends to be the neighborhood.
There is no doubt that nowadays people crave for information, especially the younger. The Internet becomes the gateway to a world of information and access to everything one can imagine. You can get the latest news around the world, you can play whenever you like the mind-blowing online games, you can download whatever you need as we have all sorts of resources for you, and you can even find your Mr. Right from Internet dating. Of course, as for we language learners, we can benefit thoroughly from the online language changing sites and communicate with people from totally different culture background.
However, it must also be recognized that the Internet is a double-edged sword, which means you have a danger of slipping into the darker side of the Internet. One day the procrastination turns to a main impediment to your academic success and the addiction of the online gambling sticks you onto the chair, until finally you are “not in control” and ruin yourself.
But for my side, I still insist that we can use the Internet appropriately, that we can be the master instead of ruled by it. You should be conscious of the fact that you have the ability to arrange the timetable properly and know when to stop. You are an adult - that’s what I want to emphasize. Cut it down seasonably before your online hobbies turn to an obsessions!

 

<em>[Very good.]</em>

November 28, 2015
haha, thanks for your compliments!&gt;o&lt;
December 28, 2015
oui le texte est beau et vrai ,aussi je ne vais pas resté devant mon écran. a m'abimé les yeux yes the texte is beautiful and right, also i don't stay more behind my screen. and will damadge my eyes
December 8, 2015
haha thank you for your approval!I'm more confident!^_^
November 28, 2015
This is very well written! A real pleasure to read and, last but not least, a deep meaning is in the content.
November 28, 2015
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