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this This is my first time to write something on line online in English. ,,I am a Chinese person (人),who want would like to learn English.
你做得很好。want 就是‘要’的意思,不过would like是想的意思。
加油!Keep it up!
this is my first time to write something on line in English ,,I am a Chinese,who want to learn English.
This is my first time writing something online in English. I am a Chinese person who wants to learn English.
or... I am Chinese, and I want...
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It was a nice start Daisy. Remember that 'Chinese' is an adjective, so if you use it by itself we don't need 'a', but if you put a noun after it, we can have 'a'.
I am a Chinese person/woman.
I am Chinese.
Hope this helps. :)
My first time
This is my first time I have written something online in English. I am a Chinese person, who wants to learn English.Hello Daisy,
Nice introduction if a little short. In English sentences always begin with a capital (big) letter. There is a pattern you should learn - if you say this is the first / second / ... time, it is often followed by the present perfect - have / has + part participle. This shows that it is the first/second.. time in your life.
Hope this helps
Bob
My first note frist time write
this is my first time to write something on line in English ,,I am a Chinese,who want to learn English.This is the first time I have written something on line in English. I am a Chinese who wants to learn English.