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My favourite season of the year. There are four seasons in my country:spring,summer,fall and winter. I would like to tell you about my favorite season.It is spring which begins in January and ends in March.At that time, I feel the air is fresh,nice.I like go jogging every morning to breathing the fresh air,doing the exercise.It's make me relax,dynamic and helpful for keep my fit.Maybe I will sing a song to start a new day.Besides,spring is also the time for Tet'holiday in Viet Nam to family reunions.Everyone clean our house and have a dinner together to happy new year.So, people who around me seem to be happier and nicer than during other times of the year.In addition,have many outdoor activities in the spring and you can find a huge variety of flowers everywhere.I realized that I love this season just because it is give me new things.
Nov 29, 2015 5:52 PM
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My favourite season of the year.

There are four seasons in my country: spring, summer, fall and winter. 
I would like to tell you about my favorite season. It is spring which begins in January and ends in March. At that time, I feel the air is fresh and nice. I like to go jogging every morning to breathing breathe in the fresh air,doing and do the exercise. It's It makes me relaxed and dynamic and it is helpful for keeping my fit. Maybe I will sing a song to start a new day. Besides, spring is also the time for Tet holiday in Viet Nam, where we have to family reunions. Everyone cleans our their house and have has a dinner together to celebrate a happy new year. So, people who around me seem to be happier and nicer than during other times of the year. In addition, have there are many outdoor activities in the spring and you can find a huge variety of flowers everywhere. I realized that I love this season just because it is gives me new things.

 

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November 29, 2015
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