Macarena
Giving my opinion on post “I have concluded that nowadays, television is indispensable. Although it may be replaced by laptop computers or tablets in the future, the television still is one of the most important devices people need in order to be updated”. I don´t agree with the statement of the previous post. I considered the television isn´t indispensable nowadays. I think the most of people that more of 20 and less of 70 don´t use the television to be updated, they use more frequently others laptop, like computers, tablets or smart phone. In my opinion Internet has more advantages than the television, but also has disadvantages too. On the one hand, Internet not only use in many devices like tablets, computers, smart phones and in addition television too, but also internet is immediately, you can use internet in many different places and want you need to be update. On the other hand Internet news isn´t always prove because all the people can write on Internet and the notices always don´t reliable. Although on television not always the news is proved, is less probably that the information that you see are incorrect. Nowadays you can be update on many different ways, like newspapers, magazine or radio but in my opinion Internet is the most important way to keep update because all the devices can be used with internet: radio, newspaper, television, computer, smart phone.
Nov 29, 2015 7:30 PM
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Giving my opinion on post

“I have concluded that nowadays, television is indispensable. Although it may be replaced by laptop computers or tablets in the future, the television still is one of the most important devices people need in order to be updated (it is better to say up to date on current events)”.


I don´t agree with the statement of the previous post. I considered the television isn´t not to be indispensable nowadays. I think the most majority of people that are more of than 20 years old and less of than 70 don´t use the television to be updated, they instead use more frequently others laptop, like computers, tablets or a smart phone.

In my opinion the Internet has more advantages than the television, but also has disadvantages too. On the one hand, the Internet not only is used in many devices like tablets, computers, smart phones and in addition televisions too, but also internet is immediately, you can use internet in many different places and want you need to be up-to-date.

On the other hand Internet news isn´t always proven (or true) because all the people can write on Internet and the notices news isn't always don´t reliable. Although on television not always the news isn't always true proved, is less probable that the information that you see on TV is incorrect.

Nowadays you can be up-to-date in many different ways, like newspapers, magazines or radio but in my opinion the Internet is the most important way to keep updated because all the devices can be used with internet: radio, newspaper, television, computer, smart phone.

 

Good job! I made a few changes and rearranged some wording so it would make sense.

November 29, 2015
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