Anastasya Sarah
Do Clothes Influence Behavior? Clothes are very important in our culture and some people tend to judge others by the way they dress. However, in my opinion, I don’t believe that wearing different clothes could make different behavior. I have some reasons about this which I will describe below. To start with, I think that clothes do not have any relation with somobody’s behavior. Behavior is more likely determined by people’s character instead. However, this character also influence how people dress theirself. I think it is the reason why there is a misconception about how clothes determine people’s nature. I have both friends who always wear the same type of clothes and different types of clothes everyday and their behavior is never depended by their fashion. They always act as the usually do no matter how they dress everyday. Furthermore, I am sure that it is not fashion that stir someone’s behavior but, beside their character, it’s the activity they are belonging instead. What makes it seems like clothes determine people’s behavior is because people also tend to dress differently due to some activities they are currently involved. For example, they would dress formally in a formal meeting such as in offices or schools and they would dress casually when they are hanging out with their friends.
Nov 30, 2015 8:02 AM
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Do Clothes Influence Behavior?

Clothes are very important in our culture and some people tend to judge others by the way they dress. However, in my opinion, I don’t believe that wearing different clothes could cause different behavior. I have some reasons for this which I will describe below.

To start with, I think that clothes do not have any relation to somebody’s behavior. Behavior is more likely determined by people’s character instead. However, this character also influences how people dress themselves. I think it is the reason why there is a misconception about how clothes determine people’s nature. I have both, friends who always wear the same type of clothes and friends who wear different types of clothes everyday and their behavior is never dependent on their fashion. They always act as they usually do, no matter how they dress everyday.

Furthermore, I am sure that it is not fashion that stir someone’s behavior but, beside their character, it’s the activity they are taking part in instead. What makes it seems like clothes determine people’s behavior is because people also tend to dress differently due to some activities in which they are currently involved. For example, they would dress formally in a formal meeting such as in offices or schools and they would dress casually when they are hanging out with their friends.

 

Hello,

 

I am not sure that I agree with your argument, do you not feel better when you put on nice clothes and look at yourself in a mirror?

 

The writing itself is fine, just make sure that yo u learn verbs with their prepositions.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

November 30, 2015
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