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Native friend.Please correct me. It is a short story. Actually, I would like to talk about one of my best friend who is older than me. We have known each other for six years. During these years, there is a really good relationship between me and his family too. He got married ten years ago and they do not have any child. He is the only child in his family and he does not have any siblings. My friend is really out going and warm with people. He is happy about being with new people and he enjoys talking them. I think, people from different walks of life are trying to be like him more. He avoids being negative person and he cannot stand talking them. He is excited about sharing his story with active friends. He is bored with not doing act. He always expects to progress in his life more than others. Interestingly, he plans to study English, to paint, and to play piano before his 45 birthday. His favorite activity is climbing. He depressed about staying home at the weekend. He is able to change my mind and share his rich experiences about life. In fact, I regard him as role model since whenever I talk to him something comes to my mind “you have to move, because you are not tree”. I do admire his generosity, kind heart, and carrying for human beings. Furthermore, I look up to because his advises have revolutionized my life.
Nov 30, 2015 3:19 PM
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Actually, I would like to talk about one of my best friends who is older than me. We have known each other for six years. During these years, there is a really good relationship between me and his family, too. He got married ten years ago and they do not have any children. He is the only child in his family and he does not have any siblings. My friend is really outgoing and warm with people. He is happy about being with new people and he enjoys talking them. I think that people from different walks of life are trying to be like him more. He avoids being a negative person and he cannot stand talking them to those people [I think that's what you meant]. He is excited about sharing his story with active friends ["active" is not the right word here. What do you mean by "active"?]. He is bored with not doing act when not doing anything. He always expects to progress in his life more than others. Interestingly, he plans to study English, to paint, and to play piano before his 45th birthday. His favorite activity is climbing. He depressed about staying home at on the weekend. He is able to change my mind and share his rich experiences about life. In fact, I regard him as role model since, whenever I talk to him, something comes to my mind: “you have to move, because you are not tree”. I do admire his generosity, kind heart, and carrying caring for human beings. Furthermore, I look up to him because his advises have revolutionized my life.

November 30, 2015
Easygoing not outgoing
November 30, 2015
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