would you check my words?
I enjoy traveling abroad.
Before a trip, I usually make a an itinerary. It make helps me to save the time and don't not be confused.
I make sure to bring my cell-phone, because it would be will serve as a map, a camera and a music playar while I travel.
Thank you for reading my sentences and please teach me~.
There are several ways to correct some of your sentences, I just noted what I would say if I was talking here in America with a friend.
Would you check my words?
I enjoy traveling abroad.
Before a trip, I usually make an itinerary. It make me saves the me time* and prevents me from don't being {better="getting"} confused.
I make sure to bring my cell-phone. Because it would be serve as a map, a camera and a music player while I travel.
Thank you for reading my sentence and please teach correct me~.
*"Makes me (do something)" has an implication that you are being forced to do something"
Would you check my words?
I enjoy traveling abroad.
Before a trip, I usually make an itinerary. It makes me save the time and not get confused.
I make sure to take my cell-phone because it is a map, a camera and a music player while I travel.
Thank you for reading my sentence and please teach me~.
Hello Rim,
The modern phone is certainly a great aid to travelling these days, it can also help you with translating too!
Just a few mistakes. Remember that 'I' in front of a verb is always a capital (big) 'I'. Always start sentences with a capital letter and you used the correct article 'a' for 'itinerary' but because it begins with a vowel sound you need to use 'an'. It is the same for all vowel sounds.
Hope this helps
Bob
Bob
Would you Check my Writing (words)?
I enjoy travelling abroad.
Before a trip, I usually make an (a) itinerary. in order to (it make me) save (the) time and ensure I don't get lost. (be confused.)
I make sure to take (bring) my cell-phone as it acts as (. Because it would be) a map, a camera and a music player (playar) while I travel.
Thank you for reading my sentences; (and) please correct (teach) me~.
would you check my words?
I enjoy traveling abroad.
before a trip, i usually make an itinerary. it make me save the time saves (me) time and I don't be get (아니면 become) confused.
I make sure to bring my cell-phone because it would be works as a map, a camera and a music player while I travel.
Thank you for reading my sentences. Please teach me~.
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