Global warming
Today is the first day of 2015 United Nations Climate Change Conference (yes, I've copied such big title :), and I'm reflectioning about the global warming. I'm relatively worried about this topic, but I can't guess If I'm too much worried or I'm not worried enough.
If I read articles from scientific people who is very worried I really get worried, on the other hand, when I read articles from scientific people whose opinion is the opposite, I find it believable too, in summary, I'm not convinced about what is really happening. Should contries be worrier about global warming?, or they would focus their efforts in make hungry disapeared?, or maybe if we don't worrier about the planet in a small time our planet can get inhabitable?.
I hope I'll know the correct answers, but I don't.
Global Warming
Today is the first day of the United Nations Climate Change Conference 2015 ( yes , I've copied such a long title ) and I am reflecting on global warming. I'm fairly worried about this subject but I can't say if I am overconcerned or not concerned enough. When I read articles from scientific people who are worried/worrying about ( global warming ) then I too become anxious. However, when I read articles from experts expressing the opposite opinion, I find these credible too. In short, I'm not really convinced about what is actually happening. Should countries be worried about global warming or should they focus their efforts in defeating world hunger ? Perhaps, if we do not worry about the planet in the short-term, it will soon become inhabitable.
Bien hecho !
Be careful about repetition of words in a sentence, por ejemplo las palabras ' worried ' en el primer paragráfo and try to use similar words to avoid this. Also, look at the beginning of your sentences.
Avoid long drawn - out sentences unless it is necessary.
If I can help you more, please talk to me.
saludos
Ciarán :)
Global warming
Today is the first day of 2015 United Nations Climate Change Conference (yes, I've copied such big title :), and I'm reflecting about global warming. I'm relatively worried about this topic, but I don't know if I'm too much worried or I'm not worried enough.