Youi
Hot spring in Taiwan. Last weekend, I went to Wulai township in new taipei city. There are tranditional aboriginal cultures, beatiful scenery ,and many hot spring hostals . Besides , I can eat a hot spring egg, an authentic taiwanese sausage. However, it's not easy to take transportation to get there , so I recommend driving car will be better.
Dec 1, 2015 9:43 AM
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Hot spring in Taiwan.

Last weekend, I went to Wulai township in New Taipei City. There are traditional native culture, beautiful scenery, and many hot spring hostels . Besides, I can eat a hot spring egg and an authentic taiwanese sausage. However, it's not easy to transportation to get there , so I recommend driving car will be better.

 

Hello Youi,

 

Nice text with just a few mistakes. Remember all place names begin with capital (big) letters. I changed aboriginal to native because as far as I know the aborigines are only from Australia (I may be wrong!)

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

December 1, 2015
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