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Describe one of my interesting and impressive adventures or experiences recently. Hi, I am going to talk about an impressive experience happening to me in recent days. I like swimming, one of my favourite sports, whereas I didn't go to swim for more than 3 years. Last week, it was the hottest day this year in Sydney and I started swimming, and the cold water in the pool really cooled me down. Some people may think, how can your swimming be a impressive adventure? Unfortunately, it was just the beginning to my following story. I got water in my right ear after I jumped into the pool, and then I started suffering from this condition, which impaired half of my listening, and even worse, made my right hemisphere feel extremely uncomfortable. I can't even hear teacher clearly and others laughed at me, saying I got water in my brain. I tried every possible methods listed online or I can find in the Internet, such as jumping with only one foot, and the result are negative and disappointing. The problem is that I can't drain the water out of my ear, although eventually it recovers after 2-3 days, when it is a painful and suffering progress. Finally, I believe it is enough to be in this condition and I went to a GP seeking for help. What I have to complaint is that it cost me $50 with a doctor talking with me for my problem and checking my ear for less ONLY 5 minutes, whereas finally he suggested me buy a Waxsol for ear cleaning,which is another $15, as ear wax may result in my condition. Tonight I am going to apply this medicine and God bless me. Overall, swimming is just a fuse detonating the explosion of my series of experiences, and I believe I've learnt sufficient knowledge and techniques during these issues. I will appreciate If you finish reading my boring writing, which could only be some kind of complaint. (Personally I use a topic in section 2 of IELTS speaking test as my main subject in the writing.)
Dec 1, 2015 12:53 PM
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Describe one of my interesting and impressive adventures or experiences recently.

Hi, I am going to talk about an impressive experience happening to me in recent days. I like swimming, one of my favourite sports, whereas I didn't go to swim for more than 3 years. Last week, it was the hottest day this year in Sydney and I started swimming, and the cold water in the pool really cooled me down. Some people may think, how can your swimming be a impressive adventure? Unfortunately, it was just the beginning to my following story. I got water in my right ear after I jumped into the pool, and then I started suffering from this condition, which impaired half of my listening, and even worse, made my right hemisphere feel extremely uncomfortable. I can't even hear teacher clearly and others laughed at me, saying I got water in my brain. I searched the Internet and tried every possible method listed online, such as jumping with only one foot, and the result are negative and disappointing. The problem is that I can't drain the water out of my ear, although eventually it recovers after 2-3 days, when it is a painful and suffering progress. Finally, I believed it is enough to be in this condition and I went to a GP seeking for help. What I have to complaint is that it cost me $50 with a doctor talking with me for my problem and checking my ear for less ONLY 5 minutes, whereas finally he suggested me buy a Waxsol for ear cleaning,which is another $15, as ear wax may result in my condition. Tonight I am going to apply this medicine and God bless me.

Overall, swimming is just a fuse detonating the explosion of my series of experiences, and I believe I've learnt sufficient knowledge and techniques during these issues. 

I will appreciate If you finish reading my boring writing, which could only be some kind of complaint.
(Personally I use a topic in section 2 of IELTS speaking test as my main subject in the writing.)

December 1, 2015
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