My first tour fair at university.
For me, today was so great. My speaking teacher asked us to make a tour fair with imaginative posters. All of my classmates prepared them well and showed/presented them. Some of us played a role as a touristsand asked them lot of information questions about their tours. But my group's members were a bit sad because we were late for class and it affected to others.* My teacher gave us some advice I thought was very useful for all of us; it was punctuality. When class finished we took a lot of photos and felt happy.
Hi Thư. Your English writing is quite good. Keep it up! Sorry if I wrote too much below. I appreciate you correcting my entry a little while ago. Thanks.
- The reason I highlighted 'speaking' is because it does not sound good. Did you mean your 'English teacher'?
- You can say both of the following, which have different meanings:
-> Some of us played the role of a tourist and asked them a lot of questions.
-> Some of us played the role of a tourist and asked them for information about the tour.
- I changed 'classes' to singular because I think your story happened all in 1 class. Is that right? If not, the sentence with the pink * should be: But my group members were a bit sad because we were late for both/all the classes and it affected others.