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My worst travel experience Hi, this is the first essay that I´m writting, I´ll talking about my worst travel experience in Monterrey, it was the last summer, my friend and me wanted meet Monterrey, so we booked in a departament for 3 nights, we had a little confusion, so when we arrived in south station, we noted that the day of the reservation will be 1 day later, so that day we walked a lot of time, with all the bags, I felt so bad. Fourtunatly we found somebody who helped us. and that is my story.
Dec 1, 2015 8:18 PM
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My worst travel experience

Hi, this is the first essay that I´m writting, I´ll talking about my worst travel experience in Monterrey, It was the last summer, my friend and I wanted to see Monterrey, so we booked in an departament for 3 nights. We were a little confused, so when we arrived in the south station, we noticed that the day of the reservation was for the next day. So that day we walked a lot oflong time, with all the bags; I felt so bad! Fourtunatly we found somebody who helped us. [and that is my story.]

 

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Looks good and glad it ended up okay in the end! I think you should split your essays into more sentences though! The first 90% is a single sentence.

December 1, 2015
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