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Jezz
Hey guys, i haven't used italki for a while. i went home to australia to visit my family and friends. now i'm back in beijing! hope everyone has been doing well in their everyday life and also with their language learning!

大家好! 哇塞 我好久没上italki了. 我去年年底回国 去看亲戚朋友, 玩儿得很开心了。 刚刚会北京。 希望你们都过得好, 外语学习学得好!。

我的中文怎么样? 退步了吗? 哈哈
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  • Written by Jezz 6 month(s) ago
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  • Bug XP 6 month(s) ago

    你的中文已经不错了,继续努力:)

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echo

Im back!

Hey guys, i haven't used italki for a while. i went home to australia to visit my family and friends. now i'm back in beijing! hope everyone has been doing well in their everyday life and also with their language learning!

大家好! 哇塞 我好久没上italki了. 我去年年底回了趟国 去看亲戚朋友, 玩儿得很开心。  刚刚会北京。 希望你们都过得好, 外语学得好!

我的中文怎么样? 退步了吗? 哈哈
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Changs

Im back!

Hey guys, i haven't used italki for a whilefor a long time. i went home to australia to visit my family and friends. now i'm back in beijing! hope everyone has been doing well in their everyday life and also with their language learning!

大家好! 哇塞 我好久没上italki了. 我去年年底回国 去看亲戚朋友, 玩儿得很开心了。  刚刚北京。 希望你们都过得好, 外语学习学得好!。

我的中文怎么样? 退步了吗? 哈哈
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orange8191

Im back!

Hey guys, i haven't used italki for a while. i went home to australia to visit my family and friends. now i'm back in beijing! hope everyone has been doing well in their everyday life and also with their language learning!

大家好! 哇塞 我好久没上italki了. 我去年年底回国 去看亲戚朋友, 玩儿得很开心。 刚刚回北京。 希望你们都过得好, 外语学习学得好!。

我的中文怎么样? 退步了吗? 哈哈

i am curious about one sentance "I'm back in beijing"&" i'm back to beijing" what's the difference?
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A M

Im back!

Hey guys, i haven't used italki for a while. i went home to australia to visit my family and friends. now i'm back in beijing! hope everyone has been doing well in their everyday life and also with their language learning!

大家好! 哇塞 我好久没上italki了我去年年底回国,回去看亲戚朋友, 玩儿得很开心了(去掉“了”), 刚刚北京。 希望你们都过得好!(祝福语一般用感叹号哦) 外语学习(去掉“学习”)学得好!。(最后一句也可以改成“外语学的越来越好!”,up to u,AND! 批评一下小朋友,感叹号与句号真的是不可连用di!)

 我的中文怎么样? 退步了吗? 哈哈(适当加个“!”也是可以的吧)

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Teacher

Im back!

Hey guys, i haven't used italki for a while. i went home to australia to visit my family and friends. now i'm back in beijing! hope everyone has been doing well in their everyday life and also with their language learning!

大家好! 哇塞 我好久没上italki了. 我去年年底回国 去看亲戚朋友, 玩儿得很开心。  刚刚北京。 希望你们都过得好, 外语学习学得好!。

我的中文怎么样? 退步了吗? 哈哈
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