梅花鹿聚集吃草

梅花鹿聚集吃草

夜晚，四只年轻的梅花鹿聚集（在一起），它们（是）红茶色的鹿，有美丽的斑点。它们都耳朵挺立（它们挺立着耳朵^.^），目不转睛地看着我，过了一会儿，它们到森林里，不见了。

Four of young Sika deer gathered at the meadow to eat grass in the night. They were reddish brown and had beautiful spots. They pricked up their ears, gazed at me, and a while later they disappeared into the fores  .

夜晚，四只年轻的梅花鹿聚集吃草。它们红茶色的，有美丽的斑点。它们都耳朵挺立，目不转睛地看我，过了一会儿，它们到森林里，不见了。

夜晚，四只年轻的梅花鹿聚集在一起吃草。它们是红茶色的鹿（not necessary），身上有美丽的斑点。它们都耳朵挺立着，目不转睛地看着我。过了一会儿，它们跑入了森林里，不见了。

Four of young Sika deer gathered at the meadow to eat grass in the night. They were reddish brown and had beautiful spots. They pricked up their ears, gazed at me, and a while later they disappeared into the forest.

梅花鹿聚集吃草

夜晚，四只年轻的梅花鹿聚集在一起吃草。它们是红茶棕色的鹿，有美丽的斑点。它们都耳朵挺立，目不转睛地看我，。过了一会儿，它们到消失在森林里，不见了。

Four of young Sika deer gathered at the meadow to eat grass in the night. They were reddish brown and had beautiful spots. They pricked up their ears, gazed at me, and a while later they disappeared into the forest.

梅花鹿聚集吃草

夜晚，四只年轻的梅花鹿聚集在一起吃草。它们是红茶色的鹿，有美丽的斑点。它们支楞着耳朵，目不转睛地看我，过了一会儿，它们到森林里去了，不见了。

Four of young Sika deer gathered at the meadow to eat grass in the night. They were reddish brown and had beautiful spots. They pricked up their ears, gazed at me, and a while later they disappeared into the forest.

梅花鹿聚集吃草

夜晚，四只年轻的梅花鹿聚集吃草。它们（是）红茶色的鹿，有美丽的斑点。它们都耳朵挺立，目不转睛地看我，过了一会儿，它们到森林里，不见了。

Four of young Sika deer gathered at the meadow to eat grass in the night. They were reddish brown and had beautiful spots. They pricked up their ears, gazed at me, and a while later they disappeared into the forest.

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