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Shanghai I am coming!

Anna
I will go to Shanghai with my best friend at the end of June,I am so exciting because it will be the first time for me to travel without a family,it will be a journey of my own! I like traveling very much, and I have traved many places in China with my families,but I have never been to Shanghai! I am exciting is not only because I can go to Shanghai, but I can actually do something without a family around me!Of course I was not saying that I did not want my families,just I think I am grow up,I need to think,to do something by myself, to control myself,to have my own life!
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  • Written by Anna 6 month(s) ago
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  • Shaimaa 6 month(s) ago

    have anice vacation anna........i hope to you to spend anice time........i love you..

  • xiaoxiao 6 month(s) ago

    哇,好厉害,居然写这么长的英文,我要向你学习学习

  • brian 6 month(s) ago

    haha .for expo? i'm in shanghai now. not for travel...555 i'm hunting a job , and it's hard.heihei

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yayami

Shanghai I am coming!

I will go to Shanghai with my best friend at the end of June,I am so exciting because it will be the first time for me to travel without a  my family,it will be a journey of my own! I like traveling very much, and I have traved many places in China with my family,but I have never been to Shanghai! I am exciting is not only because I can go to Shanghai, but I can actually do something without a  my family around me!Of course I was not saying that I do not want my family ,just I think I am have grown up, I need to think,to do somethings by myself, to control myself, and to have my own life!


[I am so excited for you!! good luck!]
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