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shanghai's weather

Joy

Cold !
hmm,Shanghai is cold now ,Suddenly...
i shouldnt be wear too much recently,just feel cold and seems that always feel not warm enough..
i am afraid of i will be wear like a bear ,....hoho,When i was in college ,scary of cold winter..so my roomates said me that way....

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shanghai's weather

Cold !
hmm,Shanghai is cold now ,Suddenly...
i shouldnt be wear too much recently (now) (I) ,just feel cold and seems that (I) always feel not (am never) warm enough..
i am afraid of i will be wear (look) like a bear ,....hoho,When i was in college ,(I was scared) scary of cold winter..so my roomates said (told) me that way....

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