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雄性的小杜鹃

Hiromi
一只雄性的小杜鹃是在太显眼的树顶点叫的。最近它们的叫远近能听。我觉得它们活跃繁殖和孵育寄生。

I found a male lesser cuckoo singing on the top of a tree, very outstanding place. Their singing voices are heard here and there these days. I wonder if they may be in breeding season and brood parasite activities busily.
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  • Written by Hiromi 6 month(s) ago
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  • Hiromi 6 month(s) ago

    Thank you for the comments, bird watching is my hobby. 谢谢你的评语。我的爱好是看的鸟。

  • Michelle Chen 6 month(s) ago

    you are very good`` 你很棒··

  • Hisun 6 month(s) ago

    你的中文有点进步了,加油!!!

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micro wang

雄性的小杜鹃

一只雄性的小杜鹃是在太显眼的树顶点叫的。最近它们的叫远近都能听得到。我怀疑它们他们是否到了活跃繁殖和孵育寄生的时期。

I found a male lesser cuckoo singing on the top of a tree, very outstanding place. Their singing voices are heard here and there these days. I wonder if they may be in breeding season and brood parasite activities busily.
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Lynne Yang
Teacher

雄性的小杜鹃

一只雄性的小杜鹃显眼的树顶叫的。最近它们的叫声远近都能听到。我觉得它们活跃正忙着繁殖和孵育寄生。

I found a male lesser cuckoo singing on the top of a tree, very outstanding place. Their singing voices are heard here and there these days. I wonder if they may be in breeding season and brood parasite activities busily.
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Michelle Chen

雄性的小杜鹃

一只雄性的小杜鹃显眼的树顶。最近(它们的叫远近能听)到处都能听到它们的叫声。我觉得它们处于活跃繁殖和孵育寄生的季节

I found a male lesser cuckoo singing on the top of a tree, very outstanding place. Their singing voices are heard here and there these days. I wonder if they may be in breeding season and brood parasite activities busily.



you write a very good composition.really.hope my modify is helpful for you`` come on`` you are just great``
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Jack Raphael

雄性的小杜鹃

我看见一只雄性的小杜鹃在显眼的树顶唱歌。最近它们的歌声经常能被我听到。我觉得它们最近是活跃繁殖和孵育寄生的时期。

I found a male lesser cuckoo singing on the top of a tree, very outstanding place. Their singing voices are heard here and there these days. I wonder if they may be in breeding season and brood parasite activities busily.
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Defoe

雄性的小杜鹃

一只雄性的小杜鹃是在太显眼的树顶点叫的。最近它们的叫远近能听。我觉得它们活跃繁殖和孵育寄生。

I found a male lesser cuckoo singing on the top of a tree, very outstanding place. Their singing voices are heard here and there these days. I wonder if they? may be in breeding season and brood parasite activities busily.

我发现了一只雄性的小杜鹃,它在很显眼的树顶上叫着。这些天它(们)的叫声到处都能听见。我不知道它(们)是不是正处于繁殖期或者在忙着孵育小生命。

你是发现了一只还是几只?前后矛盾。

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