made sam's notebook entry: Jan 04, 2011
I read
the news about
an anorexia model who passed away a few day ago.
She weighed just 27kg.
Can you believe that?!
Eventhough when she was young
she tried to stay thin, but later on, she campaigned to raise awareness of anore
xia and
the dangers of eating disorders.
She tried many time
s to defeat anorexia but
she failed.
We should think about banning
size zero models in
the fashion industry to protect healthy girls and women.
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