sacla's notebook entry: Feb 24, 2011
Wow, my notebook got corrected by a native!
What a
wonderful system this is !!! so nice!!!
It's what I needed!
By the way...
I'm going to Roma tomorrow!!!! yeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaahhh!!!!
that's the very first time to visit Europe!
("It's the first time I'm going to visit Europe" is also a good way to say it)
I can hear my heart beating toward
s it!
(You don't have to add the "towards it", but it is possible)
I can't wait...!!
But I will stay in Roma for 3 days..just 3 days.
(Instead of repeating, you can say "But I will only be staying in Roma for 3 days.")
I can't help thinking of coming back to dirty and noisy Tokyo after 3 days
of dreams.
(Adjectives are placed before a city, not after)
That will make me blue like a dead fish...
Anyways, hope this helped and that you indeed enjoyed Roma! ^-^