First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everybody，I'm a high school student.Today I bacome a member of MSN&italki users.I'd like to make friends all over the world,and improve my English,too.
I'm curious about Western culture.I like English ,but my English grades isn't satisfing.Learning English is important ,I think, not only good for my study but also brings benefits to my daily life.In terms of reading,many good books are wroten in English，though they are translated,it's also changed its reading feel.I'm looking for one day that I can read original work by myself.
That's all.I hope we can become friends and learn language from each other.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everybody.I'm a high school student.Today I become a member of MSN&Italki ~~users~~.I'd like to make friends all over the world and improve my English,too.
I'm curious about Western culture.I like English ,but my English grades aren't satisfing.Learning English is important ,I think, not only ~~good~~ for my studies but it also brings benefits to my daily life.In terms of reading,many good books are written in English. Although they are translated,this changes the "feel" of their reading .I'm looking forward to the day that I can read original works by myself.
That's all.I hope we can become friends and learn languages from each other.

As you can see, there are some corrections but for a high school student that is an excellent entry!!!