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our love 我们的爱 (F.I .R)

tian
i often remeber the things we experienced together during childhood.
you said you would hold my hand forever
i dare to keep my head up to see u from then
it seemed that my sky lost its color
i forgot to breathe from that day
i wont cry forever
our love wont come back when it failed.
i still wait for u with silence till now
our love,i know ,has become ur broblem.
however i cant forget the last warmth you gave me forever
how should i say "云朵漂浮在蓝蓝的天空"in english?
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Danielle

our love 我们的爱 (F.I .R)

I often remember the things we experienced together during childhood.
You said you would hold my hand forever,
I dared to keep my head up to look at you. 
From then on, it seemed that my sky lost its color,
I forgot how to breathe that day.
I won't cry forever...
Our love wont come back after it failed.
I'm still waiting for you in silence (This sounds better~)
Our love, I know, has become your problem.
However, I cant ever forget the last warmth you gave me.
 
I asked my Chinese friend and he told me "云朵漂浮在蓝蓝的天空" in English is "Clouds floating in the blue sky"



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Jaime
回忆里想起模糊的小时候
云朵漂浮在蓝蓝的天空
那时的你说要和我手牵手
一起走到时间的尽头

从此以后我都不敢抬头看

仿佛我的天空失去了颜色

从那一天起我忘记了呼吸

眼泪啊永远不再不再哭泣


我们的爱过了就不再回来


直到现在我还默默的等待


我们的爱我明白已变成你的负担


只是永远我都放不开


最后的温暖


你给的温暖
不要再问你是否爱我
现在我想要自由天空
远离开这被捆绑的世界
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