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Practice! Practice! Practice!

yuri
I went out to see the cherry blossom. It was a nice warm day.
A foreign girl about 10 years old was being taken a picture by her father in front of the full bloom.
One of my friends asked her parents ' If you don't mind, could I take a picture with your daughter? ' because she was so pretty, but he was ignored by them.
I think they didn't understand Japanese.
I could interpret that words, but I didn't say anything. I hid that I can speak English a little.
I wish I could speak English with confidence in my friends.

For the purpose,I need to do practice! practice! practice!
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Neal

Practice! Practice! Practice!

I went out to see the cherry blossom. It was a nice warm day.
A foreign girl about 10 years old was having her picture taken by her father in front of the full bloom.
Because she was so pretty, one of my friends asked her parents, ' If you don't mind, could I take a picture with your daughter? ' , but he was ignored by them.
I think they didn't understand Japanese.
I could have translated the words, but I didn't say anything. I hid the fact that I can speak a little English.
I wish I could speak English with confidence among (or: in front of) my friends.

For this purpose, I need to do practice! practice! practice!


There may have been a cultural difference too, Yuri.  In Britain, many people would be suspicious if a stranger asked to take a photograph of  their child.

To 'have her/his/your/their/my/one's picture taken' is an idiomatic phrase which you can use when describing someone who is being photographed; it is important to keep the right word order.
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