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Lena's notebook entry: May 09, 2011

Lena
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There is never a dead silence in the morning. A milkman, a policeman or a dog are heard despite being far away. There is no rush. People are relaxed and exchange pleasantries. Occassionally, you can see a staggering man who are unaware of the part of the day. A beautiful sunrise can be seen from a bridge and then, passing moored boats a river looks truly with its cleanness and freshness. Tall buildings are brightening up by the rays from sunlight. However, after crossing the river, the city is different as your ears can catch the raising noise making by vehicles and people. Now, nobody greets you. The city slowly starts bringing to life.
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Lena's notebook entry: May 09, 2011

Is it correct and does it make sense sensible??? Yes

There is never a dead silence in the morning. A milkman, a policeman or a dog are heard, despite being far away. There is no rush. People are relaxed and exchange pleasantries. Occassionally, you can see a staggering men, man who are unaware of the time part of the day. A beautiful sunrise can be seen from a bridge and then, passing moored boats are passing by on a river, which looks truly amazing with its cleanness and freshness. Tall buildings are brightening up by the rays from sunlight. However, after crossing the river, the city is different as your ears can catch the raising noise made making by vehicles and people. Now, nobody greets you. The city slowly fills with starts bringing to life.
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