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I lost my dad recently . . .

Sara
Late 24 june I lost my dad, after 6 months of suffering. I feel a empty in my heart and in my life. But I give thanks to God for give us strenght for these moments difficults . . .I hard to see suffering to your dad, I hard . . .forwad now I think him is resting .


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  • Written by Sara 6 month(s) ago
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  • Anton 6 month(s) ago

    It is so sad! It's a very, very pity... But you should be strong!

  • travolta 6 month(s) ago

    so sorry for hearing this sara

  • Sara 6 month(s) ago

    Thanks for your words, you are very kidness. I think to write about our sorrow is a ways of therapy for our soul. Thanks. Gracias por sus palabras, ustedes son muy amables. Pienso que escribir acerca de nuestro dolor es una forma de terapia para nuestra alma. Gracias.

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Annie G ♥

I lost my dad recently . . .

Last June 24th I lost my dad, after 6 months of suffering. I feel an emptiness in my heart and in my life. But I give thanks to God, and ask him to give us strenght in these difficult moments  . . .is hard to see your dad sufferingso hard . . .but now I think he is resting .

 

Lamento mucho tu pérdida, pero ahora el cielo ha ganado un angel que siempre te cuidara desde donde esté. Dicen que la gente muere cuando nosotros los olvidamos, por lo que tu papá siempre vivirá en tí y siempre estará orgulloso de tus logros desde donde te mire. Que Dios lo tenga en su gloria! Amén.

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Jeff

I lost My Dad Recently . . .

Late 24 june On 24 June, I lost my dad after he had suffered for 6 months1 of suffering. I feel a empty in my heart and in my life. But However,  I give thanks to God for give in giving us the strenght strength for these difficult moments difficults...  I It was hard on me seeing him to see suffering to your dad, I hard ...2 forward Now may he be in rest. I think him is resting.

My condolences.  Hope you are able to go through life again.

1.  This sentence is ambiguous.  It can mean either your dad suffered or you suffered because you saw him in his condition.

2. An ellipsis is the 3 periods together without space ie, "..." not ". . ."

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