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I have got a small paragraph which I translated from Russian into English. Could aneone (English native speaker) correct any mistakes in grammar or lexical mistakes?

Thanks a lot for your help.

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A young American company promises to bring to market a camera which is going to revolutionize photography. Quite an ambitious statement. Yet the prototype exists so far, and it has been created after years of researching.

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    Can anyone help me correct my mistakes?

    I have got a small paragraph which I translated from Russian to English. Can someone (native English speaker) correct my grammatical or lexical mistakes?

    Thanks a lot for your help.


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    A young American company promises to bring to [the] market a camera which is going to revolutionize photography. Quite an ambitious statement. Yet [only] the prototype exists so far, and it has been created after years of researching.


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    I think I know what you are trying to say, Ksenia. And I'm not sure that even the excellent "corrector" Eliot has got it.

    A young American company has promised to bring a camera to the market that will revolutionize photography. That is quite an ambitious statement. Yet, after years of research, there only exists a prototype.

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