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I have got a small paragraph which I translated from Russian into English. Could aneone (English native speaker) correct any mistakes in grammar or lexical mistakes?
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A young American company promises to bring to market a camera which is going to revolutionize photography. Quite an ambitious statement. Yet the prototype exists so far, and it has been created after years of researching.Share:
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A young American company has promised to bring a camera on the market, that will revolutionize photography. That is quite an ambitious statement. Yet, after years of research, there already exists a prototype.
Can anyone help me correct my mistakes?
I have got a small paragraph which I translated from Russian to English. Can someone (native English speaker) correct my grammatical or lexical mistakes?
Thanks a lot for your help.
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A young American company promises to bring to [the] market a camera which is going to revolutionize photography. Quite an ambitious statement. Yet [only] the prototype exists so far, and it has been created after years of researching.
* The corrections are enclosed in square brackets [ ]. I hope this helps.
I have got a small paragraph which I translated from Russian to English. Can someone (native English speaker) correct my grammatical or lexical mistakes?
Thanks a lot for your help.
Additional Details:
A young American company promises to bring to [the] market a camera which is going to revolutionize photography. Quite an ambitious statement. Yet [only] the prototype exists so far, and it has been created after years of researching.
* The corrections are enclosed in square brackets [ ]. I hope this helps.
I think I know what you are trying to say, Ksenia. And I'm not sure that even the excellent "corrector" Eliot has got it.
A young American company has promised to bring a camera to the market that will revolutionize photography. That is quite an ambitious statement. Yet, after years of research, there only exists a prototype.
A young American company has promised to bring a camera to the market that will revolutionize photography. That is quite an ambitious statement. Yet, after years of research, there only exists a prototype.
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