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In the past, people used to use different types of correspondence in their daily lives to inform each other about different occasions, such as writing letters, and using telegram.

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Sarah
Jan 25, 2013
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Very nice sentence.

I would suggest a few changes:

In the past, people used different kinds of correspondence, such as letters and telegrams, to inform each other of important events in their daily lives.

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James
Jan 25, 2013
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