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    Hello Andriana. How are you?

    Here is how I construct an essay.

    Step (1) First I do a websearch on Earth Day.

    Here is what I found first, and it contains some basic info you will want to know.

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    "Earth Day originally celebrated at Spring Equinox around March 20, is an annual day on which events are held worldwide to increase awareness and appreciation of the Earth's natural environment. Now Earth Day is coordinated globally by the Earth Day Network,[1] and is celebrated in more than 175 countries every year.[2] In 2009, the United Nations designated April 22 International Mother Earth Day.[3] Earth Day is planned for April 22 in all years at least through 2015.[4]

    The name and concept of Earth Day was pioneered by John McConnell in 1969 at a UNESCO Conference in San Francisco. He proposed March 21, 1970, the first day of spring in the northern hemisphere. This day of nature's equipoise was later sanctioned in a Proclamation signed by Secretary General U Thant at the United Nations. A month later a separate Earth Day was founded by United States Senator Gaylord Nelson as an environmental teach-in first held on April 22, 1970. While this April 22 Earth Day was focused on the United States, an organization launched by Denis Hayes, who was the original national coordinator in 1970, took it international in 1990 and organized events in 141 nations.[5][6] Numerous communities celebrate Earth Week, an entire week of activities focused on environmental issues."---Wikipedia


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    Step (2) Then I get similar information from about 7 or 8 other websites.
    More or less information depends on your judgement about what you need.

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    Step (4) Then when I have all the basic information, I begin constructing the sentences.

    In this step, I borrow clever phrases and strong vocabulary from everything I have read.

    Some articles will have boring language in a description. Other articles will have strong phrases which serve to make powerful statements.

    Then I start changing the sentences to basically, add to them, a lot of my own preferred vocabulary.

    For example, a common verb is the word SHOWS. We all know what it means when a writer tells us that a certain fact SHOWS something.

    I always change such words to a more sophisticated vocabulary which means exactly the same thing. In my essays SHOWS becomes "indicates," "demonstrates," "illustrates,"
    "articulates," "enunciates," and so forth and so on. You see?

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    CONCLUSION:

    In the early steps, because perhaps I am not always an original thinker, I borrow sentences just as they were written. By the time I am finished, no sentence is ever the same as it was in its original form.

    This prevents any reader from accusing me of a Plagiarism. Plagiarism is a form of stealing, where you copy entire paragraphs from some article, without quoting the original author as the source of the writing.

    Actually, every essay can be enlarged, when you quote a few sentences or a paragraph here and there in an essay, to quote someone who is a credible authority. Scientists are good to quote, when their work is quoted from a Peer Reviewed Science Publication. Experts of all kinds are good for quoting on a subject.

    Good luck with your essay on Earth Day.---Warm Regards, Bruce


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    Step (3) Then I begin arranging the information in an outline form.

    I like to find about 3 things which support any of my published claims, and it really looks good to list them as

    (a) Blah blah

    (b) Blah blah

    (c) Blah Blah

    Now remember, an essay does not have to be in an "outline" form like
    I a, b c, II abc, and III abc

    But!...the basic information you gather should be arranged in an orderly manner.

    You can add to this, information you find on the subject from Library Books, Magazines and so forth and so on.

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