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Making these stylistic chooses Marcovaldo created an universal dimension in which there is a transformation of the everyday existence in a common condition of the human being, connecting past and present, deads and alives, close and far lands. He filtered through his pen the culture and the history of Italy in a very universal condition, considering the particular situations, but also the the past and the general points of view moulding through his way of writing also a cosmic vision of life. This was possible because there is evidence that the prose of Marcovaldo is very close to the forms of the poetry
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Making these stylistic choices, Marcovaldo created a universal dimension in which there is a transformation of everyday existence into a common condition of human beings, connecting past and present, those who are dead and those who are alive, and near and far lands. He filtered through his pen the culture and the history of Italy in a very universal condition, considering the present situation, but also the past, and the general point of view which permeates through his way of writing offers a cosmic vision of life. This was possible because there is evidence that the prose of Marcovaldo is very close to the poetic form.
In general, your paragraph was nicely written, but in a few instances, it wasn’t entirely clear to me what you intended to say. In those instances, I tried to guess what you meant while doing my suggested corrections. If I guessed, wrong, vi prego di accettare le mie scuse.
Making these stylistic choices, Marcovaldo created a universal dimension in which there is a transformation of everyday existence into a common condition of human beings, connecting past and present, those who are dead and those who are alive, and near and far lands. He filtered through his pen the culture and the history of Italy in a very universal condition, considering the present situation, but also the past, and the general point of view which permeates through his way of writing offers a cosmic vision of life. This was possible because there is evidence that the prose of Marcovaldo is very close to the poetic form.
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