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On the 4th of March, founders of L-S Club by Maesto Liu & Sun Liu Shi Kun and Sun Ying paid a visit to MKH. Group and its subsidiary —— Shenzhen Western International Jewelry City, in the companion of Chairman of MKH. Group Ni Hanming, Group Vice-president Zhu Zhiqiong and other group leaders.

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    Not quite, though it is mostly understandable.

    On the 4th of March, -[founders of L-S Club by Maesto Liu & Sun Liu Shi Kun and Sun Ying paid a visit to MKH Group]-, and its subsidiary--Shenzhen Western International Jewelry City, in the company of the chairman of the MKH Group, Ni Hanming, Group Vice-president Zhu Zhiqiong, and other group leaders.

    I bracketed off the part that is the most difficult to understand. Is Maestro Liu & Sun Liu Shi Kun a single entity? If no, then it should be "founders of L-S Club by Maesto Liu, Sun Liu Shi Kun, and Sun Ying paid a visit to MKH Group". If yes, it is pretty awkward to leave as one sentence, and I suggest breaking it up, though that can be especially difficult when all the pieces seem to fit together to tell a single coherent story, as is the case with the sentence in question.

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