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I want to express that I have been happy to do volunteer works and for example, I volunteered in World Expo 2010 Shanghai, China. But I wish to express this meaning in a concise manner in my coverletter.

Could I say " I have also enjoyed participating volunteer works such as World Expo 2010 Shanghai, China." Is this sentence correct?

For learning: English
Base language: English
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    I have also enjoyed participating in volunteer works such as World Expo 2010 in Shanghai, China.

    I have also enjoyed performing volunteer work, including at World Expo 2010, Shanghai, China.

    My love for volunteer service is best exemplified by my work at World Expo 2010 in Shanghai.

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