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is the latter part of my sentence right?

In some degree, playing mahjong is just an entertainment, but philosophy it contained benefits a lot to our career development.

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    No, it is incorrect, but pretty close. I made a few other changes to the first part too.

    To some degree, playing mahjong is just for entertainment, but its philosophy benefits our career development a lot.

    "its philosophy" is more natural way to say "the philosophy it contains".

    You could also say "strategy" instead of philosophy.

    There should be a noun following "benefits", so I changed that part slightly too.

    Hope that helps!

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