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1.John had to move his head slightly in order to look at Mary, seeing as she was hugging him.

2. Her cheeks had an interesting habit of turning the loveliest shade of pink when Daniel was joking with her like this…or generally if he so much as mentioned anything Marc-related.

3.He wondered how long that had been brewing beneath Daniel's pastel surface and how much his little betrayal had contributed to that fight with his father. "What would that change? If you knew?” Marc asked carefully. “He would still be dead only you would be even more miserable knowing that. I think your father was just trying to protect you."

4. Let’s take a moment to discuss what was Helen expecting from this (not that she was expecting anything really, she was too busy struggling with breathing and trying to stop her heart from jumping out of her ribcage)

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