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Due to the properties and artistic features of jewelry, consumers care more about its quality, style and price than other factors when they are buying jewelry. But we should also notice that jewelry brand plays an essential role in jewelry purchasing.

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    Due to the properties and artistic features, consumers care more about its quality, style and price than other factors when they are buying jewellery.

    Saying jeweelery twice seems a little strange.

    We should also notice that brand plays an essential role in jewellery purchasing.

    ...role in purchasing jewellery. <-- I like this one better, but I don't know why.

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