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At 3:00 pm, the 11th of April, the forum held in XX industrial park mainly focus on somehuman resources problems, especiall the minimum wage and the temporary employment.

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    'the 11th April' refers to the whole day - omit 'the'
    Omit 'some'

    ... the forum held in XX industrial park focussed mainly on human resources problems, and in particular on the questions of minimum wage and temporary employment.

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    At 3:00 pm, on the 11th of April, the forum held in XX industrial park mainly focus's on human resources problems, especially minimum wage and temporary employment.

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